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for Tsurgdari of course. so far I have four of them in my head.

Vengence AU: My first alternate universe.
Shiro has made it to Afron after making through the forest, in a mission to reunite with his little brother (as in the canon story), however, it takes a turn for the worse after learning that his brother has been murdered by an assassin. Captured by Kashka and imprisoned back in Tsukani village, Shiro takes on the mantle of Kuro with his traditional Tsukani funeral uniform, and makes a new mission, find those responsible for Taro's death, and seek his revenge.
Parts of this universe has already appeared in Tsurgdari: Internal Conflict ( Tsurgdari: Internal Conflict, part 1
Chapter 1: The Secret Herb
Since a while back, around a week or two, I have since left Afron, I been on this road in the pursuit of my little brother Taro.
Almost 4 weeks ago, Taro went missing in Hunting Grounds back at home and when we went to find him, our village was attacked during the true nightfall ceremony.
He was blamed by the entire village for the attack, and he was accused of plotting with the barbarians, as such, he was permanently banished.
I been very worried for him, ever since I was knocked off the bridge in Karihan and with Kashka on the hunt to find me. With the help of some folks whom I met in the woods. I continued on to the Rakbasil Ruins, it is there I was attacked by the deadly sniper, Kynigi.
After defeating her, I learned a very dark, and scary reality, Taro is a target by bounty hunters! But what does not make sense, why? And who called for this horrible thing?!
After I reached Afron, Kynigi bribed
)

Toroi AU:
This AU revolves around Taro, or his name in this one, Toroi.

Orphaned by misfortune of his people and war, Toroi knows nothing of his father, mother, or older brother. He lives solely to fight, and only to fight.

Unlike Taro who has a strong sense of guilt and fearful, Toroi is foul-mouthed, rebellious, with very little sense of remorse. He is a thief, somewhat hateful, and has issues he has to learn to deal with such as his ancestry to the Tsukani tribe, and his folks he never knew of. 
In this universe, the planet is somewhat more advanced (with revolver-like weapons, tanks, and dart/arrow casings that revolutionized sling weapons)

Extinction AU:

20 years ago on the life has gone on like always, until one fateful day, their planet was struck by the small dwarf planet, Shila. Causing massive earthquakes and destabilizing the entire Tsurgdari planet. Causing many deaths, and destruction of normalized trade.
While days passed, many got back onto their lives..

as years gone by however, grass and plants begin to die, as well as livestock, and the atmosphere slowly leeching out.

Present day, after their home becomes destitute. Shiro with his brother, Taro leave to look for a new life, while fighting the climate, civil decay, and many whom seek to harm them. In the goal to find safety to wait for the planet to restabilize.
This one is currently going through a planing phase as it does not conflict with any other series

Tsurg"doggy" AU:
This AU is a lot more unorthodox to the others and the main series. This one revolves around earth, where many of the characters are imagined as dogs. (IE: Layl an excited puppy and his Human owner. Kashka the stray dog. Taro the recently adopted puppy)
This story would be a parody of the first few books in the main series, only more light-hearted. X3 

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going to bed early. college resumes tomorrow.
for Tsurgdari of course. so far I have four of them in my head.

Vengence AU: My first alternate universe.
Shiro has made it to Afron after making through the forest, in a mission to reunite with his little brother (as in the canon story), however, it takes a turn for the worse after learning that his brother has been murdered by an assassin. Captured by Kashka and imprisoned back in Tsukani village, Shiro takes on the mantle of Kuro with his traditional Tsukani funeral uniform, and makes a new mission, find those responsible for Taro's death, and seek his revenge.
Parts of this universe has already appeared in Tsurgdari: Internal Conflict ( Tsurgdari: Internal Conflict, part 1
Chapter 1: The Secret Herb
Since a while back, around a week or two, I have since left Afron, I been on this road in the pursuit of my little brother Taro.
Almost 4 weeks ago, Taro went missing in Hunting Grounds back at home and when we went to find him, our village was attacked during the true nightfall ceremony.
He was blamed by the entire village for the attack, and he was accused of plotting with the barbarians, as such, he was permanently banished.
I been very worried for him, ever since I was knocked off the bridge in Karihan and with Kashka on the hunt to find me. With the help of some folks whom I met in the woods. I continued on to the Rakbasil Ruins, it is there I was attacked by the deadly sniper, Kynigi.
After defeating her, I learned a very dark, and scary reality, Taro is a target by bounty hunters! But what does not make sense, why? And who called for this horrible thing?!
After I reached Afron, Kynigi bribed
)

Toroi AU:
This AU revolves around Taro, or his name in this one, Toroi.

Orphaned by misfortune of his people and war, Toroi knows nothing of his father, mother, or older brother. He lives solely to fight, and only to fight.

Unlike Taro who has a strong sense of guilt and fearful, Toroi is foul-mouthed, rebellious, with very little sense of remorse. He is a thief, somewhat hateful, and has issues he has to learn to deal with such as his ancestry to the Tsukani tribe, and his folks he never knew of. 
In this universe, the planet is somewhat more advanced (with revolver-like weapons, tanks, and dart/arrow casings that revolutionized sling weapons)

Extinction AU:

20 years ago on the life has gone on like always, until one fateful day, their planet was struck by the small dwarf planet, Shila. Causing massive earthquakes and destabilizing the entire Tsurgdari planet. Causing many deaths, and destruction of normalized trade.
While days passed, many got back onto their lives..

as years gone by however, grass and plants begin to die, as well as livestock, and the atmosphere slowly leeching out.

Present day, after their home becomes destitute. Shiro with his brother, Taro leave to look for a new life, while fighting the climate, civil decay, and many whom seek to harm them. In the goal to find safety to wait for the planet to restabilize.
This one is currently going through a planing phase as it does not conflict with any other series

Tsurg"doggy" AU:
This AU is a lot more unorthodox to the others and the main series. This one revolves around earth, where many of the characters are imagined as dogs. (IE: Layl an excited puppy and his Human owner. Kashka the stray dog. Taro the recently adopted puppy)
This story would be a parody of the first few books in the main series, only more light-hearted. X3 

They finally added toddlers into the sims 4, so I finally got to make a Sims version of Lanny's family.

while it does add the family dynamic that EA took away, it is not without its bugs.

Pro's:
-it completes family building.
-more items and interactions.
-they control very well.
-really fun to control
-unlike the sims 2 and 3, they can technically already walk, which just works for me.
-They can learn more skills than in Sims 2 and 3

Cons:
-toddlers can be shipped off to daycare all the sudden when visiting another lot.
-the controls to care for them are rather buggy at best. one bug sometimes makes it painfully difficult to care for toddlers.
-lots of bugs that could still be worked out. 
-Not enough community objects for lots, nor high-chairs that are suited for restaurants.
Really exhausted.
though this is what happens when you are not used to going to bed late

Chapter 15: Books and Stealth.


The next day, I return to the elder and she shows me around, I ask about the tribes, and she refers me to the books of: Ashi, Oksoti as well as Illtitsi tribes. But these are the only tribes that she seems to be willing to part. I understand why I been told to not read about the vile Tsukani. The ones whom made my dad very angry in the past. But there is another tribe, but I cannot seem to get permission to read about it, the Beshili tribe?

While I decide to honor Dad's request, I prefer to at least know the enemy, something I myself never understood. I read the title: “The Isolated Tsukani Tribe.”

“The Tsukani tribe descended from the old Tsuri tribe 2000 years ago, the Tsuri were famed for their fighting ability just like the Tsukani are. The Tsukani tribe came to be during the Tsuri Civil War, fought between the Tsuri led by Taibu and barbarian groups that splintered from them, one led by the rebel general, Zuga. As the brutal fighting went on, both sides advanced in technology of war as well as tactics.

The war ended with Zuga's rebellion being put down, and the Tsuri tribe becoming permanently dissolved into what is today known as the Tsukani tribe.”

Before I can read chapter 1, I feel a paw onto my head.

“You're up early.”

Dad glances over at the book, and glares at it. “You are reading about the Tsukani? Those vile bandits?”

“Yes, but I want to know, what makes the Tsukani vile?” I ask.

Dad talks about the Uiki Feud, the fight for the sword between the Northern Mountain Tribes. He talks how he was attacked by Taisho of the Tsukani tribe, who managed to actually win against him.

I try to ask more about the sword, but Dad merely snaps. “It doesn't exist!”

I decide to ask him more about Tsukani guilt.

Dad mentions that the Ton's have existed for generations, as well as lecturing me about the Rak'ani war, the war fought 300 years back. He tells how when many of the Tribes fled in terror, the Tons fought hard and constantly fought tooth and nail against the mega tribe. When the entire region sought help from the Tsukani, many were denied, many refugees had nowhere to go, as a consequence, many became the barbarian tribes that exist today.

The Ton's on the other hand, they fought on their own, without support from the Northern Mountain Army. If it wasn't for the Tons, massacres by the Rak'ani would have been more massive.


After the talk, dad heads for a shelf, and hands a field manual for staying stealthy, bringing up hiding in plain sight. He goes over it with me, he tosses rings to specific areas in our village, and I would go after them, with one rule. I cannot be seen by anyone.

After trail and error, I begin to understand this stealthiness even more, more than what Kiru could teach.


After two days of training, Dad calls me back into the house.

“Yes dad?”

“How do you feel on the quick lesson we taught you?”

“Good.”

He nods and points to a bag with a map and rations.

“I want you to infiltrate this location.” Dad points, I glare unto the village of Tsukani. “You want me to kill them on my own?”

“No no, killing will not be required, but remember your training, you are doing this alone.”

Alone? This is rather new to me, I never been alone before, but regardless I take my bags and head for the village.


Chapter 16: The Tsukani Tribe.


Dad taught me everything I needed to know about this mission. For the first, I had to blend in, normally this would be an issue but with Lord General Taibeishi, he has been working to modernize the Tsukani Tribe, so I can still get into village itself. But with a vulnerable disguise. As in, to look like a normal little child, a look of a simple robe top and shorts, since apparently children like to wear shorts.

Finished with a wig that covers my bandana completely, with a typical pony tail seen on many children. A common look.

Going in alone, I traverse upwards to the plateau, faking a cheerful look as I walk towards the gate of our enemy, Tsukani village of the Tsukani tribe. Dad made it very clear about my assignment, blend in as a visitor, and do not expose myself unless it is self-defense, and even then, do not expose my true identity.


I pass the tower that I assume is where the Lord General lives, across the street, seems to be a larger house being built, and next to it, a series of wooden garage doors, and some birds, Tsukani Guards wear their re-enforced straw hat, leather vests and rope guards on their armored boots, they still instill their mighty glares, despite being away from real fighting for years. They still have that ability to fight that angers my dad.

“Halt child!” A guard at their eastern gate shouts with a rough voice. I am stopped right at the gate.

“State your business.”

“Umm...hello, I am Waii.” I tell him in my distorted 'cute' voice, as instructed by dad, dunno why I have to be cute in this, but apparently it works.

“That is not what I asked!” The guard barks.

“Oh, I am nothing more than a traveler, always wanted to see the Tsukani tribe.”

“You are awfully young for a traveler.” He claims. My heart beats faster, did he see through me?

He glares on closer and closer to me. I sweat and try to move back, my heart races more, Dad said this would be high-stress, and he is right!

“What's wrong? Are you lying about being a traveler?” He asks in a very taunting tone. The level of pressure is making me grab for my machete that I have concealed among my equipment in the bag.

“Toy! Leave the kid alone, you're scaring him!” A Tsukani women shouts.

“Sanu, please do not interfer.....”

“I'm sorry, but you are acting as if he is a barbarian child!” Sanu interrupts. My heart is telling me to attack, the pressure is intense! I grip my machete harder.

“Relax Sanu, I'm just giving the runt a hard time. Gotta keep the young ones on their toes.” Toy claims.

“Uggh, now you are sounding like Beitan......”

“Well, better for me to do it.” Toy jokes.

“Good point, he probably would not even guard the gate.” Sanu laughs. I guess they are rather lax?


Toy looks at my bag and its contents for inspection, he asks a few questions, then shortly he returns the bag.

“Odd to have blank papers, but the bag does check out, you may enter the village.” Toy says.


I go on in and take in the sights of this small but lonely plateau. My first village I ever visited where I wont be murdering its inhabitants. This is quite new for me.

The warehouse and bathhouse to the left of my sight. To the right, the messengers hut. Straight ahead of me, the giant guard tower built on a stone arch. Giving the guards a complete view of their village.

I cautiously walk under the arch, gazing at every Tsukani, every house, and every guard, counting the numbers, to report to dad.

I suddenly feel a little force that stops me, I look down at me feet. A Tsukani toddler, around 2 years of age, with blue and yellow eyes, and an upside down Y haircut pattern, adorned with a sleeveless white robe top and a red cloth diaper.

I stare and glare at this child, what is he doing? He is only staring back. I stare at him, he keeps on.

Soon his blank stare turns to a giggling coo as he points at my forehead and shouts. “DA!”

Da? What is that supposed to mean?

“Shiro, leave him alone, it is time to get ready for bed!” A female Tsukani shouts. This, Shiro rushes at his mom and she carries him inside.

Finally alone, I continue my espionage down the village. I am able to get all the information I need, but now I just need extra information on the western half of this place, through the western gate.

As I do, I am immediately stopped, and told that only villagers are allowed in the Cherry Grove.


I turn around and backtrack, I need to get reconnaissance at the cherry grove, but I cannot seem to do this. I will have to find another way.

I walk along while reviewing my detailed map, I gauge the sizes of the plateaus, unfortunately, this plateau is the highest one that is close by enough to get view of the place. However, there is one where I will be able to see something that might give away the sight of the cherry grove. There is a point where I can climb and take a glance, getting the general idea of the village.

I make it outside where I am in the clear.


Only to bump into a grown-up, I look up at him, with his somewhat wild brown hair, a blue robe and purple with red eyes.

“Oh hello. I'm Waii.” I tell him. He does not seem interested, almost calm about meeting someone.

“What were you doing in our village?” He asks.

“Oh, I was just visiting.”

“You mean taking notes of the layout of our village?”

My heart goes into defense mode again, how did he deduce this quickly?!

“I just returned from training, and I saw you putting on that disguise, only to find that you were coming to our village.”

But that was a day ago, how would he even know?!

“Ummm.”

“You are going to come with me, Dad will decide your doings.” He says, he reaches for me.

I swing my machete out and swipe at him, only to be deflected by a small zipseren needle this man holds. The man jumps back and shouts.

“We are under attack! Spy!” He shouts, pointing at me.


Tsukani guards surround us, and Toy grips me. I grunt and seethe and squirm.

“Whoever, you really are, you're under arrest!” Toy shouts.


Chapter 17: Compromised!


The Tsukani guards, those vile ones! They get closer to me with those ropes, to imprison me. I squirm and fight as Toy restrains me, I grit and hiss, fighting against this stronger enemy's grip.

With an act of final grit, I clamp down with my teeth into Toy's arm, forcing him to let go, and I bolt on all fours, running and panting as fast as I can!

Toy blows a whistle and the guard tower rings a bell, sending all guards on alert and after me.

I rush out of the miniature forest and out onto the paths of tall red grasses and cross roads. Running for my safety.


Two land sailors pass by, and 9 guards leap out from them, some armed with outdated slingshot guns, they approach me steadily. I back away and prepare to turn around.

Another land sailor stops and another set of 9 guards surround me. Leaving me trapped and outnumbered.

“You are surrounded kid, come quietly and you will not be harmed, this is your only warning!” Toy barks.

I look around quickly, the tall red grass? It is a place to hide, but they'll see me, the Tsukani won't fall for that. I look to the right, a ledge to slide down.

Before Toy can grab me, I jump right and slide down the sharp, jagged rocks, fighting the pain that scrapes my back. I leap into a roll onto a smaller path and as sure, the land sailors are quickly moving to my position, I look around and jump to a bush.

Toy and his guards stop the sailor, Toy holds this boxed shaped weapon, I believe dad called that weapon, 'The Tsukani Arrowbox.” a rapid fire system.

“This is your last chance, surrender or we will shoot!” Toy barks with an agitated voice.

With no more options, I take my slingshot pistol, and aim with my new training, with the side sight, I shoot a dart. The dark punches into a guard's neck, he coughs and gags as he fall on the floor.

“Guard down!” a Guard shouts.

“Weapons free!” Toy shouts, the guards begin to shoot at me.


I turn around and jump off the cliff, taking an arrow to my back, with the intense air blowing at me, I grip a branch on a tree, only for it to snap, I fall forward and hit the ground.

My arm feels as if it is completely bruised, despite this, I fight to get back up, I continue running as the Guards try to find me.


I keep running down until I find the landmark that was once used as a pathway. The twin plateau.

I climb up the right side of it, as the red eclipse shines its eyes upon me, very nostalgic. To think, two years ago, this was the same red night sky which I killed Dad's other son, my step-brother of sorts.

On the top of the plateau, I look at the larger plateau, the plateau where I was at, Tsukani village. I covered so much ground in just an hour, all at the expense of my arm, I take the medical kit made for me, and treat my arm, and sit. To rest, I am finally safe-----


My ears suddenly perk up to footsteps.

“Is this the one that was marking down points in our village, Fusho?” A voice asks.

“Yes brother, he also attacked me.” Fusho claims.

“Not to mention the guard that is getting emergency surgery on his neck.”

I turn around and find another Tsurgdar with full armor. And his hair formation, with Dad's description, I step back with pressure, Deputy General Taisho stands before me!

“Hey kid, why were you observing our village? As it stands, you have to have permission from the Lord General to sketch such points, and you injured a guard.” Taisho claims.

I merely stand there with a warning growl. Taisho prepares to get closer to me. “You give those papers to us and I'll pretend you were not here.”

My heart gets tense as the enemy dad has set upon me is closer and closer to me.

“Careful brother, he is armed!” Fusho warns.

Taisho gets onto his knees onto my level of eye sight. “Will you give those papers so we do not have to resort to anything bad?”

My heart races as he gets closer and closer.

My eye's dilate, and Fusho sees it, he pulls Taisho away as I try to slash him with my knives.

Tsurgdari KS2: Spies and Stealth (ch. 15-17)
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Romulus907 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016
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PEOPLE OF THE INTERNET.WE NEED YOUR HELP. THIS MAN HAS LIVED A TRAGIC LIFE AND I CANNOT BEAR TO WATCH HIM THIS WAY. PLEASE, IF YOU HAVE ANYTHING YOU WANT TO DO OR ANYTHING YOU WANT TO SAY, NOW ITS THE TIME. NO ONE MUST BE TREATED LIKE THIS AND ITS TIME WE RISE UP AND TAKE A STAND!
BECAUSE WE HAVE A RIGHT TO DO THE THINGS WE LOVE!! AND I AM NOT JUST GOING TO SIT HERE AND DO NOTHING WHILE THE WORLD FALLS INTO CHAOS. ITS TIME WE FIGHT FOR THE RIGHT OF MANKIND!!!! WE WILL FIGHT EVEN IF THE ODDS ARE STACK AGAINST US. BECAUSE TONIGHT, THIS WORLD WILL KNOW OUR NAME. FOR I AM LORD ROMULUS, AND I FIGHT FOR THE RIGHT OF EVERYONE. WILL YOU HELP US?
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Sreddyswag Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2016  Student General Artist
Thank you for the favorite, hope you got a kick out of it.
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haleigh426 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
hi there, do you like Toonstruck?
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landonbay Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I dont know what that is
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It's a point and click CD-ROM game. m.youtube.com/watch?v=R2NcUV5m…
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haleigh426 Featured By Owner Edited Oct 19, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
It's a great game made in 1996.
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My Pikachu's afraid of Jack Nicholson's Joker.
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Thanks for the fav ^^
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